I am very satisfied with what I wrote today. And it didn't even take me long to wrap it up. :)
on the train going home
crowded train carriage
each person
silent with their thoughts
texting
touching
iphones
a chime
mechanical lady
announcing stations.
18/04/2011
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2011
2 comments:
perfect!
thank you, magiceye!
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