Monday, May 9, 2011

Poison

This was written for a Haiku Heights prompt. The word was "poison".




image from Haiku Heights



poison



time -
the slow poison.

a page yellows.



08/05/2011
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2011

8 comments:

Jingle said...

lovely.
agreed.

dsnake1 said...

thank you, Jingle! :)

beccagivens said...

Oh so true! Nicely done!

Liz Lim said...

I love how you effectively showed that time is indeed a sort of poison.

mindlovemisery said...

poignant. Love it

dsnake1 said...

hi beccagivens,

thank you! :)


hi Liz,

i ran the gamut from arsenic to zinc, even the dior perfume. then i thought what is the one thing that will get us in the end, and the haiku just wrote itself. :)


hi mindlovemisery,

thanks for visiting! :)

Judith C Evans said...

Great take on this prompt. "a page yellows" -- love this last line!

dsnake1 said...

hi Judith,

thanks for your comments. :)

about the last line, i wrote a few images for that, but settled on the page yellowing, as i felt that this image is the strongest.