Wednesday, April 24, 2013

NaPoWriMo 2013, Day #24 - innocence

Wow, twenty four days and haven't skipped a day yet.




photo by virginiamol
image from morguefile.com




innocence


i)

another morning -

in the child's eyes
a bottle of milk


ii)

how many more mornings
before innocence

is lost.


24/04/2013
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013

3 comments:

Ravenblack said...

Nice. Wouldn't need to part this as (i) and (ii) at all imho. :)

Lynn Fisher said...

Lovely...and sad as well.
Congrats on day 24...not too much time to go!!!! Can we do it? YES!
Lynn

dsnake1 said...

Liz,

now that you mentioned it, yes, the flow seems better.

i separated it into 2 parts to show childhood and adulthood. but now it looks like it is not necessary. :)


Lynn,

thank you!

oh yes, we can do it!