Wow, twenty four days and haven't skipped a day yet.
innocence
i)
another morning -
in the child's eyes
a bottle of milk
ii)
how many more mornings
before innocence
is lost.
24/04/2013
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013
3 comments:
Nice. Wouldn't need to part this as (i) and (ii) at all imho. :)
Lovely...and sad as well.
Congrats on day 24...not too much time to go!!!! Can we do it? YES!
Lynn
Liz,
now that you mentioned it, yes, the flow seems better.
i separated it into 2 parts to show childhood and adulthood. but now it looks like it is not necessary. :)
Lynn,
thank you!
oh yes, we can do it!
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