Wednesday, October 16, 2013

A Haiku A day - thunder

October is a Haiku Writing Month at A Haiku A Day.




image by dsnake1, done with Sketchpad



thunder



after the thunder
the blackbirds
                fold their wings again.


16/10/2013
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013

3 comments:

howanxious said...

Really nice... I like the intricate balance, you manage in your haiku.

-HA

alan1704 said...

I like it, that birds sense freedom and know power.

dsnake1 said...

HA,

glad that you find the formatting of the haiku helpful.:)


alan,

thanks! it helps that there are thunderstorms during the past two days. :)