Sunday, October 27, 2013

A Haiku A Day - waterfall

October is a Haiku Writing Month at A Haiku A Day.



image by dsnake1, done with pencilmadness




waterfall




waterfall

the thunder of water over rocks.

centuries



27/10/2013
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Note: Well, I am not too satisfied with today's piece.


© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013

4 comments:

howanxious said...

The timelessness of natural wonders- beautifully expressed. :-)

-HA

dsnake1 said...

timeless, it is!

thanks! :)

Lolly Williams said...


switch it up:



waterfall
the thunder of centuries
over the rocks

dsnake1 said...

that's the beauty of sharing, and commenting. sometimes a fresh perspective is offered. :)

your version has that extra "oomph" and power to it. no wonder i was feeling not too satisfied with my haiku.

If it's okay with you, i will edit this post to include your version. it's too good to be missed. :)