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image by dsnake1, done with pencilmadness
waterfall
waterfall
the thunder of water over rocks.
centuries
27/10/2013
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Note: Well, I am not too satisfied with today's piece.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013
4 comments:
The timelessness of natural wonders- beautifully expressed. :-)
-HA
timeless, it is!
thanks! :)
switch it up:
waterfall
the thunder of centuries
over the rocks
that's the beauty of sharing, and commenting. sometimes a fresh perspective is offered. :)
your version has that extra "oomph" and power to it. no wonder i was feeling not too satisfied with my haiku.
If it's okay with you, i will edit this post to include your version. it's too good to be missed. :)
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