tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post7264958009380894018..comments2024-01-20T23:01:01.266+08:00Comments on i write too: NaPoWriMo 2012 - Day # 1 - choa chu kang, cemetery path 4dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-61084909262787522152012-04-02T20:45:36.538+08:002012-04-02T20:45:36.538+08:00Ashok,
my friend, thanks for the encouragement! :...Ashok,<br /><br />my friend, thanks for the encouragement! :)<br /><br /><br /><br />andy,<br /><br />thanks for the comments. :)dsnake1http://dsnake6.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-20388960170682907052012-04-02T08:09:43.381+08:002012-04-02T08:09:43.381+08:00Gentle memories, well recorded!Gentle memories, well recorded!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-88405664252341090302012-04-02T01:52:37.275+08:002012-04-02T01:52:37.275+08:00all the best!cheers...all the best!cheers...ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-54588265472682674532012-04-01T23:18:01.463+08:002012-04-01T23:18:01.463+08:00thanks, raven, for your thoughtful comments.
yeah...thanks, raven, for your thoughtful comments.<br /><br />yeah, even i found it a bit somber but that's the mood of the poem. <br />the live firing range is just beyond the hills, the booms are evenly spaced, not random like thunder, so i am pretty sure it's military stuff. and yes,a haze would have completed the picture. :)<br /><br />old burial grounds make way for space for the living, that's a hard truth for a land-scarce country. :(<br /><br />all the best on your Napowrimo journey too! :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-10887736760759698502012-04-01T22:37:15.838+08:002012-04-01T22:37:15.838+08:00It's lovely, even though a bit somber. The boo...It's lovely, even though a bit somber. The boom -- makes one wonder if it's thunder or really artillery. Add the effect of a kind of in-thought haze.<br /><br /> Everyday, I make my way to work, I have to go by Lornie Road and they are already in the process of exhuming the old graves there. One day there may be no more such places.<br /><br />All the best on NaPoWriMo!Ravenblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.com