tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post7332668730633552492..comments2024-01-20T23:01:01.266+08:00Comments on i write too: A Haiku A Day - waterfalldsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-66650079286172378872013-11-07T21:45:54.500+08:002013-11-07T21:45:54.500+08:00that's the beauty of sharing, and commenting. ...that's the beauty of sharing, and commenting. sometimes a fresh perspective is offered. :)<br /><br />your version has that extra "oomph" and power to it. no wonder i was feeling not too satisfied with my haiku.<br /><br />If it's okay with you, i will edit this post to include your version. it's too good to be missed. :)<br />dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-68717722192978678322013-11-07T04:08:06.119+08:002013-11-07T04:08:06.119+08:00
switch it up:
waterfall
the thunder of centuri...<br />switch it up:<br /><br /><br /><br />waterfall<br />the thunder of centuries<br />over the rocksLollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-44848382650033822012013-10-28T20:29:12.618+08:002013-10-28T20:29:12.618+08:00timeless, it is!
thanks! :)timeless, it is!<br /><br />thanks! :)dsnake1http://dsnake6.blogspot.sg/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-53089611887234613412013-10-28T03:33:07.241+08:002013-10-28T03:33:07.241+08:00The timelessness of natural wonders- beautifully e...The timelessness of natural wonders- beautifully expressed. :-)<br /><br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com