tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post8499216746369357617..comments2024-01-20T23:01:01.266+08:00Comments on i write too: The Height of Haiku Challenge - Day 2dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-59764081907083270022011-09-13T19:54:22.758+08:002011-09-13T19:54:22.758+08:00very scientific, Traci. :)
actually, i am trying ...very scientific, Traci. :)<br /><br />actually, i am trying to infer that i would not look at a mirror in the dark.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-32753871783073522952011-09-13T04:05:53.356+08:002011-09-13T04:05:53.356+08:00Interesting idea. I've never considered a mir...Interesting idea. I've never considered a mirror reflecting sound instead of image, but I suppose in the dark, sound waves would bounce off it more readily than light waves...TraciBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01060016951190175207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-82338583962605162002011-09-04T22:10:30.934+08:002011-09-04T22:10:30.934+08:00i wanted to show that i dare not look into a mirro...i wanted to show that i dare not look into a mirror in the dark, thus it reflects only sounds. :)<br /><br />the single line is intentional. in modern english haiku, i think it is acceptable. it is used to heighten an effect. in this case i wanted the reader to read it in a single breath, without a pause, because i am writing about fear.<br /><br />Thanks, Leo, for your insightful comments! :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2225641449722557011.post-9917333659507747312011-09-04T10:15:08.951+08:002011-09-04T10:15:08.951+08:00yes, but does the sound help us see ourselves? or ...yes, but does the sound help us see ourselves? or whatever is making the sound? :) interesting take for sure.<br /><br />the formatting has gone awry here, dsnake. has come out as a single line than a haiku :PVinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.com