Thursday, April 21, 2011

NaPoWriMo 2011 - # 21

# 21


do not agitate



Found an old draft and did some editing...


field of grass


the morning sun stretches on a field
of wild grass and mimosa

soaking them in a warm wash
of golden lights and gentle wind.

a pair of egrets drop in, white wings
flapping, looking for breakfast.

there is nothing between the grass
and a vast blue of sky

but perhaps in a month

the grass-cutters' blades
will shave their heads.


11.05.07
revised 21/04/2011







© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2011

6 comments:

vivinfrance said...

A delightful scene round which you have woven a delightful poem.

Lynn Fisher said...

Congrats on being the site of the day...wonderful poem. It really is visual...love it. By the way, the graphic is inspired, and SO true!

dsnake1 said...

thank you, vivinfrance! :)

dsnake1 said...

Hi Lynn,

thanks for visiting! it's kind of strange when i realised that this blog was the site of the day. this is a happy surprise. :)

the graphic was done with the help of an on-line generator. thought i would inject some humour before the post. :)

lucychili said...

i like egrets too =)

dsnake1 said...

thanks, lucychili!

i saw these birds in a field one morning on my way to work, and it inspired this work. :)