Thursday, September 15, 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge - Day 15

Today's Theme : Patience



and lots of doggedness. half way point already?







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a spider web
still in the afternoon air.

a prey will come...

15/09/2011
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2011

12 comments:

kaykuala said...

The spider certainly has to have patience waiting for its prey.

dsnake1 said...

kaykuala, thanks for visiting!

yes, and most predators too. :)

Rekha said...

Can it to apply to human predators too? lovely haiku.

dsnake1 said...

thanks, Rekha!

i guess so, but the web they spin will have to be more complex. :)

mjshorts said...

Some things are worth patiently waiting for.

beccagivens said...

great one!!!

Nanka said...

A lot of patience here not only in spinning the web but also to lie in wait for the prey!!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nicely said but I hate spiders.



Melanie

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Any kind of waiting demands patience!

Patience of the Ant

dsnake1 said...

Mike,

you're right on that count. :)
thanks!


becca,

thank you!


Nanka,

i think this applies in life too. i used to have little patience, but as i get older, ... :)


Melanie,

i don't really like spiders too, but i admire them for their survivability.


MMT,

well said! :)

Traci B said...

I don't like spiders in my space, but I do admire their web artistry. It takes some patience to spin all that silk...

Excellent response to the prompt.

dsnake1 said...

Traci,
thank you! i think most people dislike spiders, but their web is a fantastic creation.