Thursday, September 22, 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge - Day 22

Today's Theme : bullseye



i struggled a bit with this theme...







501


pitted wall
around the dartboard.

needs more practice.


22/09/2011
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2011

8 comments:

mjshorts said...

Don't we all.
Great haiku.

The Cello Strings said...

true.

fun take.

dsnake1 said...

Mike, thank you.
i think people will be thinking about the title, 501. :)

dsnake1 said...

Hi Cello Strings, i must be commenting when you visited.

thanks, glad that you saw the humour in it. :)

Nanka said...

Pitted wall made me smile!! :D Much time put into practice!! :)

Traci B said...

Great take on the prompt, d. I would definitely be pitting the wall around the dartboard.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

My wall would like your wall! :-)

Door as Bull’s-Eye

dsnake1 said...

Nanka,

glad it made you smiled.
maybe more talent needed? :)


Traci,

can't be that bad? i used to play the game, but wasn't too good at it.


MMT,

hahaha, time to bring out the filler and wall paint. :)