Friday, September 9, 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge - Day 9

Today's Theme : Yearn



tough theme, until i thought of someone special...







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rainy night -

i woke up, yearning
for the warmth of your body.

09/09/2011
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2011

5 comments:

Rekha said...

Longing perfectly captured and rains do add fuel to the fire.

Leo said...

ah.. mixed emotions in this.. a yearning for love, that is joyous.. yet some indication that that love was once there.. that is saddening. interestingly written, Lee.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Yearning fulfilled or unfulfilled?

Some Yearning Here

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Yeah, cleverly done!!

dsnake1 said...

Rekha,

thank you!
in a way you are right, adding fuel to fire. :)


Leo,

you got it right here, about mixed emotions. :)


MMT,

unfulfilled, because she's not there. :(
thanks for the visit!


andy,

thank you!