Saturday, October 12, 2013

A Haiku A Day - fragrant breeze

October is a Haiku Writing Month at A Haiku A Day.




photo by melodi2
image from morguefile.com




fragrant breeze



a fragrant breeze
the graveyard's plumeria -

i quicken my steps.



12/10/2013
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013

6 comments:

alan1704 said...

I like it, fear and fragrance, quick steps, great words

dsnake1 said...

thank you, alan!

some superstition from our culture again. :)

howanxious said...

Nice... a very real life picture. Well-written.

-HA

dsnake1 said...

thank you, HA!

Jayanthy said...

Well written dSnake!
I liked the end of it! :)

dsnake1 said...

Jayanthy,

thank you!

it is said the fragipani produces the strongest scent at night, so yeah, i worked the haiku around some asian beliefs. :)