Thursday, April 16, 2009

NaPoWriMo #16

NaPoWriMo #16


Managed to wring this out at the last minute. Definitely needs some editing when i have the time. :)


R&R


our faces
were green
from all the bad beer
but then maybe
it was
the apple
of neon tubes
glowing
on the wall
above our heads
like some alien
spacecraft
in this
smoky bar
and the girls,
tight tees
and short skirts
were trying
to push
more bad beer
and more
and i wonder why
my comrades and i
could not
have more
sedate
      cultural
           exchanges.



© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2009

2 comments:

kate said...

this is truly genuine. i'm impressed. :]

dsnake1 said...

Hi kate, thanks for visiting!

yeah, this actually happened, i was just recalling from memory. :)