not good enough #17

There's something about the moon..
Submitted to an online site. Rejected.

photo by 34680 at pixabay


untitled


ripples ) ) )

on the lotus pond
the moon's smile widens


submitted Aug 2020
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2020

Haiku Horizons - ocean

Ocean. Haiku Horizons' prompt this week. Trying out a visual poem. I guess my effort cannot be called a haiku. Probably I was thinking about the Cutty Sark whiskey I drank before.

drawing by dsnake1 with pencilmadness





haiku horizons - ocean



oceanocean clipper oceanocean
oceanoceanoceanoceanoceanocean
oceanoceanoceanoceanoceanocean

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ah, let's get back to serious business...



the ocean waves
defiant
toss out a beer can on the beach




© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2017