The theme for the August 2015 Free Format section of the monthly kukai at haikuworld was 'Path'. I kept thinking about the theme for a couple of weeks, and then almost right on the dot of the deadline, wrote one and sent it in.
Well, it scored a total of ... 0 votes. :)
image by dsnake1 done with pencilmadness
august 2015 free format shiki kukai
this morning
walking into sunshine -
the prison's gate closes.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2015
2 comments:
I liked it. It was brief but intense. :-)
Thanks.
Greetings from London.
hey, i am pleasantly surprised to see you here. :)
i liked this piece too, despite it not getting any votes. it can be interpreted as a poem of hope, or a new start. thus the link to "path".
thanks for your comment!
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