Saturday, August 29, 2015

shiki kukai - path

The theme for the August 2015 Free Format section of the monthly kukai at haikuworld was 'Path'. I kept thinking about the theme for a couple of weeks, and then almost right on the dot of the deadline, wrote one and sent it in.

Well, it scored a total of ... 0 votes. :)

image by dsnake1 done with pencilmadness

august 2015 free format shiki kukai

this morning
walking into sunshine -

the prison's gate closes.

© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2015


A Cuban In London said...

I liked it. It was brief but intense. :-)


Greetings from London.

dsnake1 said...

hey, i am pleasantly surprised to see you here. :)

i liked this piece too, despite it not getting any votes. it can be interpreted as a poem of hope, or a new start. thus the link to "path".

thanks for your comment!