Wednesday, April 27, 2011

NaPoWriMo 2011 - # 27

# 27

do not agitate

Okay, rounding the corner.

morning at a bus stop

rain clouds rolled and curled
like oily gunsmoke across
an early morning sky
which had suddenly
taken on a hue
of bruised grey
as a wind
dead leaves
paper and
on the asphalt
around our feet
as we waited impatiently
at a bus shelter to start the day.


© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2011


Jeanne said...

I really like this one. I could feel the wind at the bus stop, the waiting.

Jeanne said...

I could feel the air around the bus stop, "bruised grey". the waiting. really like the imagery.

dsnake1 said...

strange how an activity like waiting for a bus to work can inspire this. the tropical storms over here can brew quite unexpectedly. :)

thanks for visiting, jeanne!