shiki kukai - moonless

The theme for the October kigo section of the monthly kukai at haikuworld was "Moonless Night" or "Moonless". The haiku came to me very early, but I spent quite some time deliberating over it, changing a word here, changing a line there. And guess what, in the end, I submitted the original draft. :)

And wow! It scored zero votes in the kukai. :D

I still think it's good.

image by dsnake1 done with pencilmadness




september 2014 kigo shiki kukai




this night -
the moth's death wish
with my pressure lamp.





© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2014