Saturday, November 1, 2014

shiki kukai - moonless

The theme for the October kigo section of the monthly kukai at haikuworld was "Moonless Night" or "Moonless". The haiku came to me very early, but I spent quite some time deliberating over it, changing a word here, changing a line there. And guess what, in the end, I submitted the original draft. :)

And wow! It scored zero votes in the kukai. :D

I still think it's good.

image by dsnake1 done with pencilmadness

september 2014 kigo shiki kukai

this night -
the moth's death wish
with my pressure lamp.

© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2014

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