Tuesday, April 2, 2013

NaPoWriMo 2013, Day #2 - one night on a quiet road

Day 2 and looking good. This piece looks/sounds jerky but that's what I intended.

one night on a quiet road


the bat fluttered
in the space
inches from my



my face
white as the lines
on the asphalt


© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013


Ravenblack said...

That can be quite a shock! :D

dsnake1 said...

you bet! :D

i think it was a species of fruit bat. there were many around that area because the road was lined with mango trees. i don't know why that bat was so blur.

Lynn Fisher said...

My face would be too! I love the poem : ) Very visual and small...like a haiku.

dsnake1 said...
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dsnake1 said...

It was totally unexpected. good thing it didn't landed onto my face. :D

thanks for finding this poem visual. :)