one night on a quiet road
startled
the bat fluttered
in the space
inches from my
face
startled
my face
white as the lines
on the asphalt
02/04/2013
**********
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013
Tuesday, April 2, 2013
NaPoWriMo 2013, Day #2 - one night on a quiet road
Day 2 and looking good. This piece looks/sounds jerky but that's what I intended.
one night on a quiet road
startled
the bat fluttered
in the space
inches from my
face
startled
my face
white as the lines
on the asphalt
02/04/2013
**********
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013
one night on a quiet road
startled
the bat fluttered
in the space
inches from my
face
startled
my face
white as the lines
on the asphalt
02/04/2013
**********
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ), 2013
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5 comments:
That can be quite a shock! :D
you bet! :D
i think it was a species of fruit bat. there were many around that area because the road was lined with mango trees. i don't know why that bat was so blur.
My face would be too! I love the poem : ) Very visual and small...like a haiku.
Lynn
It was totally unexpected. good thing it didn't landed onto my face. :D
thanks for finding this poem visual. :)
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